Writing your essay

You are writing an essay on  “Who is your favorite genius, Edison or Tesla?

1st paragraph introduce your choice with major details.Tell us why you like him. What makes him your favorite.

2nd paragraph Talk about what your genius did

3rd paragraph restate why you chose him as your favorite genius.

7 responses

  1. Jayden.M

    1. I like Tesla because he made Ac and Ac can go far away.
    2. He made the Transformer that can go to house.
    3. Tesla power cord didn’t lit on fire.

    June 20, 2017 at 8:38 am

  2. Jayden conde

    1. Nicholas Tesla was a good guy he build big transformers littie
    2. Thomas Edison was a good man

    June 20, 2017 at 8:39 am

  3. thomas Edison current a phonograph and he was born in the 1800,s , and he was a scientist , in school he was kick out of school because he was hyperactive and he was home schooling , then when he was 18, he had a laboratory and he higher 2 people , then everyone had power in there homes , and electric grid a light bul

    June 20, 2017 at 8:39 am

  4. Geoffrey

    My favorite genius is Nikola Tesla because he made an ac current that does not make fires.
    He was a great inventor. One day he was petting his cat and he got an electric shock from
    the cats fur he had an idea thats why he made an ac current. He made a light bulb that lasts longer than Thomas Edison’s. AC current went farther than DC current.
    He worked with wireless technology.
    If it wasn’t for Nikola tesla we would not have good power. I like tesla because he made the world better.

    June 20, 2017 at 8:43 am

  5. the reason why i picked Thomas Edison is because Thomas Edison struggled in school but learned to love reading and conducting experiment from his mother taught him at home.at age is Edison became tramp telegrapher,” sending and receiving messages via morse code ,an electronically conveyed alphabet using different click for each letter. Eventually he worked for the union army as a telegraph Edison often entertained himself by talking thing apart to see how they worked soon he decided to become an inventor

    this is why i picked Thomas Edison

    June 20, 2017 at 8:46 am

  6. Ayannablackman

    Thomas edision made lightbulbs. This made a lot of people happy because they lived in darkness before this. Edison did not go to school he was self taught. He invented a telegraph first. It gave him and he opened up a big lab where he invented many things.
    The world would be different if he had never lived. He made it light.

    June 20, 2017 at 8:54 am

  7. The Genius I chose is Tesla I think they are both important but one fact about Edison Bothers me.
    First we have to know that Tesla and Edison worked together then they worked against each other. Edison had made direct current. Tesla Ac current . They fought over currents. Tesla had made a better current that was safer and could travel farther.
    The fact that bothers me is that Edison killed an elephant with Tesla’s AC current to prove it was dangerous. This was wrong. No one should torture an animal .
    Tesla was a Serbian scientist who was famous not only for working with AC current and he invented a transformer that made AC current possible because you could transform voltages high to low in the electrical grid.
    Tesla is also responsible for radio and wireless technology. The world uses wireless technology . Tesla is the guy who came up with wireless technology. These are reasons Tesla is my genius.
    By Isaiah James

    June 23, 2017 at 7:42 am

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